Originally, I intended to write the novel from several different points of view. Each of the wives would share their history, though the focus would be on Jennifer, the young woman snatched to replace a dead wife. I wrote 58 pages – nearly 15,000 words – before I realized I was telling the wrong story.
Irene was a minor character. As the eldest daughter of the family, she was supposed to be smart but obedient. And she was – but she also witnessed too many inconsistencies for her to remain obedient for long. The character practically screamed at me as I wrote a third-person limited-omniscient chapter for her. When I had finished the chapter, I knew Irene was my protagonist. I started the novel over, writing Irene’s story from a first-person perspective. The concept of folie imposee was not abandoned, but it definitely became secondary to Irene’s coming-of-age tale.
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